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Miles Haggard

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my first shot at a character, tried to make him so that he has some "theory" behind blowing stuff up to flush him out, also his Physical Characteristics is a little thin because i can't seem to make a picture of him in my mind.

please point out weird grammar because even if i have reread it three times i keep changing things on random locations screwing everything up again.
 
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I've worked with the player a bit on the character but I feel like the character mods will be able to help Log along better than I can.
 
I think the major issues are grammar and verb tense. The content of the writing raises no eyebrows on my part.
 
i have to apply again an other time, massive work from university have come up and i don't have time for this anymore.
 
Alright, just let us know when you're ready!
 
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