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Approved Submission Mining Guild's Stork

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Hi, we just need the NDC FM to approve, then I will take this review!
 
I will start my review shortly!
 
Just some minor issues that I see initially. Let's help get this approved!

1. The sentence under the header here needs to be complete.

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2. There are a few instances of words in the article that could be linked in/wikified, this section for example (there are others, please go through the article).

  • Nekovalkyrja, Separa'shan, Bolt Shuttle, etc can all be wikified in this example.

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3. In this area, the "double headers" don't really work, ie. putting "computer:" under the already existing header. This should be reformatted.

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4. Earlier in the article you state there is only one deck, there appears to be a bit of confusion/contradiction here:

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Overall

Minor issues, for the most part, take your time and evaluate your article closely for quality and formatting. Feel free to contact me if you need any help, I am usually available on discord. Let me know when you've had a chance to get this corrected!

Thank You for your Submission!
 
Hey Andrew,

Thank you very much for taking up my submission for review!

I am replying to this to let you know I had worked on some of the issue’s you had found, and before posting this, I had looked over everything so I am hoping that things are good. I also went over the deck layout, and placed a paragraph there, rather than a list I hope that’s OK.
 
The MG is for Mining Guild, but the second one, I might have gotten confused, since T is shuttle and Y is civilian craft, it’s kind of both, but in relooking in the article you linked, I went in to change the nomenclature.
 
It would be MG-Y1-1A, Y1= 1st Civilian Ship Model, 1A, meaning it is the first version.

The 4201, 4202, etc would be for components not for actual full ships. :)
 
Great Job! We did it!

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Submission is Approved.
 
@Andrew the uh stork isn't a yamatain ship, it's an NDC vessel. They don't use the same nomenclature system. It's company letters - item type/function characters - version/variant. So like the recently approved centaur tank was S6-MBT-1A for example.
 
As far as I know, the standard nomenclature is for everyone.

It was originally developed by Ketsurui Zaibatsu in YE 24 for the Star Army of Yamatai but since then it has become a de facto international standard and is used by most major manufacturers in the Kikyo Cluster.
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Anyway, if you guys are going to use a different nomenclature system you should make a page or section on that page for it so that reviewers can reference it.
 
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