If you were making a shuttle, you would use the starship template. It might seem silly to do so to some, but it makes sense for the wider audience of the setting. Although combat armor is not a direct mirror of power armor, it is basically a sub-category to it for this intent and purpose.
I am telling you it wouldn't be wasted space to fill out the power armor's sections. Not every one of them translate to this equipment, but even that is worthy to note. The whole "Systems" section and sub-section is key, honestly. I don't know how you fail to see this and I don't need to hear you debate it further. If you want to get articles approved, following rules is important, so please do so.
The example I used in the
Complete Sentences wip's example section that I made for you is the first sentence of the article, I just switched two terms to wombats and hugs. Check that out. If you need more help, I can fine tooth comb your work by adding warning signs behind every sentence that is an issue like this:
. I don't really want to do this. This is a teach a man to fish vs handing a man a bunch of fish moment. I would like for you to learn how to write properly or this issue will come up again and again.
Here are a couple examples of sentence fragments within your article:
Making their soldiers better equipped and more gave them more protection.
This influencing the design to have female and male size groups.
Ranging from extra small to 2x large in size categories.
Without the need for any further outside help in producing the combat armor.
Each of your paragraphs is littered with these kind of sentence fragments. For me to write out warning signs would do you a disservice if you have not read the wiki I wrote for you, as well, which I hoped would clearly highlight the problem to you. If you have not read that article, please do so now so that you may understand where you can take your writing in the future. If you have already read the article, I think you should look up some of the keywords I proposed as important so that you may, again, understand.
Thank you for submitting your article. Now, I need you to work with me and within the rules to make something that can be accepted into the canon.
] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
