Approved Character [[Monarchy of Dovania]] [Soldiers of Dovania] Faris Zlatan Hodžić

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:character:faris_zlatan_hodzic

Submitting Faris Zlatan Hodžić as a character for the Faction of the Monarchy of Dovania.

The occupation page linked is a wip in its OOC notes but is not in the wip namespace. Can you take out the link to it on his page and rectify the namespace issue for the occupation page?

Pretty cool and thorough for someone so high ranking, good on that.

What is a Giant Dovania?

There are a huge number of incomplete sentences. I made a guide on complete sentences here. The amount of context that is needed to complete your sentences means I can not complete them for you, as I might be adding in the wrong info. I will need to either go into the article and mark which sentences need work or post them here. Which do you prefer?

Grammar has been fixed, Occupation page has been fixed to be a WIP. As far as what a Giant Dovania is, it's a moth.

Alright, thank you. I fixed the wip tag on the occupation page as it needs to be in front of any other tags. The wip: needs to be the first part of the custom addition of the URL.

And can you unlink the occupation and just keep Black Beret as unlinked, then link it when it is approved?

Thanks!

Occupation has been updated to what you requested until the Dovanian Occupations Page has been completed.

Approved