Approved Character [Monarchy of Dovania] Yamada Jensing

[Dragon_God]

URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:character:yamada_jesing

 

[Dragon_God]

Posting this for a friend. I approve.

 

[FrostJaeger]

@Dragon God - I was skimming through the character bio, and I noticed a mention of a martial art named “Akikai.” Is this “Akikai” going to be submitted to the NTSEin the future? I ask since many weapons in Star Army can’t really be deflected - and because, well, the ability to deflect any kind of attack can become very overpowered if not managed correctly.

 

[Dragon_God]

It’s melee, hence meaning hand to hand, and in regards to that. And involving melee weapons. Such as is they were in a PA it Mecha, then they would be able to deflect melee attacks from others or lower.

 

[Jack Pine]

Not like they can deflect bullets, or rail rounds, or lasers with their hands. This could only really pertain to melee.

 

[FrostJaeger]

Ah, okay - thanks for clarifying that, @Dragon God and @Jack Pine. ovob

 

[Ametheliana]

Not enough of this article is wiki-fied, spelling and grammar mistakes need to be fixed (I just noticed "enemies strikes" which should be "enemy's strikes" skills are in the wrong format, I want to know what pattern her fur is orange and black, as well.

 

[club24]

Not to be rude ame, but wes has stated multiple times as of late that as a reviewer if you notice spelling mistakes then you should fix them since they're easy to do instead of just hassling the submitter.