Hellos!
i'm the GM for the Soyokaze.
i like the character
Just a few issues I see with the whole page.
She'd be about a year old.
You can have up to 6 skills. Use them up, They are handy from time to time.
Inventory, there is a code box on the character creation page for a soldier. Copy the code over and bam.
Also skin color, is she tan, white, pink, blue green, neon teal?
Past that I'm all for you joining my plot!!
Hit me up on the IRC if you like some help.