Approved Submission Nataria System

Normally I'd say this is great! Let's approve it - but, due to the fact that Nataria is the Nekovalkyrja homeworld going to suggest some things. Sorry I didn't notice when we spoke before that there were multiple articles. Very sorry I didn't notice when we spoke on discord.

1. Maybe finding a way to merge these:

Nataria on Star Army Space Roleplay and Nataria on Star Army Space Roleplay

• All of their histories are on one page, is easier to update, etc.
• I'd also suggest a deep dive into the system/planet's history to see maybe if the history part of the article can be fleshed out a little. - Search results for query: Nataria - making footnotes from the history section that connect to actual roleplays.

Other than that, just due to the importance of this world for the faction @Wes and @Yuuki to chime in.

What Drew said

Sorry for the confusion, it's why I asked so many times about the page Wes smooshed a couple years ago or last year, which did feature some information from my original system WIP from 2018ish.

New WIP: (places:nataria).

I have pushed THESE two together into the places nameset, and also added more citations of RP as well as corrected a few things. I could not locate the original RP thread for the Second Battle of Nataria, just when the Eucharis shows up after.

So just to be clear: system submissions going forward should be under places, and include major planets on that page, rather than system and/or planet?

That's another thing I was trying to get clarified earlier.

systems should be under systems as far as I know, not places?

Yuuki said:

systems should be under systems as far as I know, not places?

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Not sure about this, originally when the place's namespace was made - everything was to go into it that was a place. Nebulae were converted into places, etc and struct was used to differentiate the type of place. I think systems were originally supposed to move to when converted to the places template, but not sure if any of that ever happened a I was not here - @Wes would know more.

This looks better to me.

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Approved.