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Approved Character [NDC] Exia Tessa Pine

Ametheliana

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FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
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This character's wiki page includes a lot of copy pasta. Can you please reword it to not do so?
 
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Jack Pine

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@Ametheliana about the only thing copied was the skills and history which I have now expanded upon for additional detail and clarification. Hopefully that works for making it stand apart more. They were copied for the fact that like some of the previous characters, some being mentioned in the history section, are all clones. They share mostly the same history, and a lot of the same skills in certain occupation roles.
 

Ametheliana

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FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
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56% of her history is the same as another clone's as made evident here. It's not about expanding but retracting, rephrasing, and/or expanding. You must take away the copied text to avoid it be copy/pasta. Adding a sentence here or there doesn't change that more than half of it is from another page.
 
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