Hey Ray!
Fun article.
Here's a few things that stand out on a quick glance.
It's common to have a bit of text after the each section, including the initial one. Under the very first 'Stabbage' header, you should include a brief description of what the plant is and what it's most important qualities are. Think of it like, "If someone only reads this one section, I want them to come away with a good understanding." It's also normal to include a year that the item was 'released', but in this case - maybe when people realized it wasn't just normal cabbage?
Template wise, it looks like we don't have anything for a specific plant species. I think you're okay with this approach, but I have some suggestions.
These two templates seem relevant:
You might be able to pull a few things from those over to make the article look more 'official'. The damage portion in particular would benefit from the same formatting as the Ammunition on the 'Weapon' template. (
[[guide:damage_rating_v3|Purpose]]: (Damage Rating here - Tier XX, Heavy/Medium/Light Anti-Personnel/Armor/Mecha/Starship/Capital Ship)
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I think you'd be well served to break the 'Description' block into a few sub-sections. Taste, Harvesting, etc.
Other possibilities are things like how much it costs, etc, but that's just further roleplay considerations.
All in all, very nicely thought out.
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Thanks again for the submission! If no one has picked this up for review in a few days, I'll do the honors.