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Tagging @Legix for FM approval of this ship class.
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Approved Submission [Nepleslia] De Luca-Class Cruiser
- Thread starter Ametheliana
- Start date
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Quick question, @Ametheliana - how many of each weapon system does the De Luca have?
Edit: Also, how many shuttles, fighters, and tanks can it carry?
Edit: Also, how many shuttles, fighters, and tanks can it carry?
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Zack
Inactive Member
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ X ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ X ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ X ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. DR adjustments are needed
* The dazzle would need to be updated for DRv3
* Curbstompers would need to be updated to DRv3
* Phase Cannons would need to be updated to DRv3
* Plasma Turrets would need to be updated to DRv3
2. Would also need to know how many turrets and missile launchers are on the ship.
3. Finally, need to list how many tanks / shuttles / fighters the ship can carry.
4. I know this has been WIP for a while so it might have already seen some use in RP, but is the YE 39 year listing accurate? Or does that need to be changed to YE 40?
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ X ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ X ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ X ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. DR adjustments are needed
* The dazzle would need to be updated for DRv3
* Curbstompers would need to be updated to DRv3
* Phase Cannons would need to be updated to DRv3
* Plasma Turrets would need to be updated to DRv3
2. Would also need to know how many turrets and missile launchers are on the ship.
3. Finally, need to list how many tanks / shuttles / fighters the ship can carry.
4. I know this has been WIP for a while so it might have already seen some use in RP, but is the YE 39 year listing accurate? Or does that need to be changed to YE 40?
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
Very complete and helpful checklist. I will be completing these changes right away.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Just a heads-up, @Ametheliana and @Zack - this section of the Submission Rules states that “...re-approval is required for changes to Damage Rating version (i.e. converting from DRv2 to DRv3).”
I was planning on putting things up for approval.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Ah, okay - my bad, then. >.<
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
May I have a status update on this, please, @Ametheliana?
