Approved Submission [Nepleslia] Hy-bras'iil

[Ethereal]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=location:hy-bras_iil

Submission Type: City
Template Used: N/A

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? No @Legix
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
Home of one of the two civilisations on Agartha.

 

[Ametheliana]

Can you make the Victorian London thing an OOC note, in some way?

 

[Ethereal]

Updated.

 

[Ametheliana]

@Arbitrated seems to be taking this submission.

 

[Arbitrated]

Oh neat I was originally thinking this was part of like, the planet submission but this works too
So yeah I'll handle it Ye ^^
(Dang Eth yer a busy boi)

 

[Ethereal]

Anything else I need to do here?

 

[Arbitrated]

For the most part everything looks great, but can you link to some other articles please? As well as stating the planet (Argartha) it's on.

Is "The Pack" one of the Clans in control of the city? If so, I think that might need a bit of clarification.


Those are my only questions, one those are resolved and @Legix gives that stinky official FM approval I don't see a reason this can't be approved when the main planet gets approved! ovob

 

[Legix]

FM approved.

 

[Arbitrated]

(Hey @Ametheliana or @Rizzo or @META_mahn can one of you nerdos move this to approved since I'm not able to? Thankies~)

 

[Wes]

No approval or checklist has been posted.