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Approved Submission [Nepleslia] SAW Corps

Legix

Legix

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https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:saw
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Where's the meme?

I don't believe Wardens should get a new uniform if a) they are just going to be Peacekeeper uniforms and b) they don't have art.
 
Ametheliana said:
Where's the meme?

I don't believe Wardens should get a new uniform if a) they are just going to be Peacekeeper uniforms and b) they don't have art.
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I mean, okay.

I'll just bring them art at a later date for some unique peacekeeper uniforms. Removing the note for now and adjusting.
 
Ametheliana said:
Edit noted.

Why would they wear Peacekeeper uniforms at all when they cannot wear them while on-duty?:
As a compromise, Peacekeepers were allowed to maintain and wear their old uniforms as long as they were off-duty.
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Primarily because the UOC's Jiyuuians have been a part of Nepleslia and have long had a close bond with them. The Peacekeepers also maintained a semblance of order and specialized in doubling their roles. It made a lot of sense to me that Nepleslia would finally acknowledge this and allow them to wear their uniforms in-service in-place of special rewards. This is also why I wanted to incorporate a Peacekeeper-inspired uniform: Jiyuuians and UOC migrants are still part of Nepleslia that I believe should be acknowledged and developed.

Of course I'm going to be going against the grain a bit with articles posted up ages ago. But I'm also trying to push Nepleslia in ways that prior FMs failed and develop/expand on ALL of its colorful history. This includes even the ex-UOC and small aspects like the Jiyuuians. If it's as simple as a new uniform, then it'd be something I want in the future.
 
I don't believe re-integrating an old uniform is a good idea and it's the one thing that is glaringly wrong with this article.
 
This review is for: SAW corps with URL https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:nepleslia:saw

The submitted article is/has…
[✓] A very high level of overall quality
[✓] A general topic sentence under the title header
[✓] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[✓] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[✓] In the proper format/template
[✓] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[✓] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[✓] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[✓] No red and/or broken links
[✓] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[✓] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[✓] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[✓] Obtusely redundant
[✓] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[✓] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[✓] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[✓] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[✓] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[✓] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[✓] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[✓] Lacking Detail
[✓] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[-] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[-] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[-] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[-] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Approved
 
Didn't we decide as a group to use a red "Star of Life" (e.g. the "paramedic emblem") as an internationally recognizable symbol for Nepleslian medics' armbands? What about that?
 
Wes said:
Didn't we decide as a group to use a red "Star of Life" (e.g. the "paramedic emblem") as an internationally recognizable symbol for Nepleslian medics' armbands? What about that?
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I believe it SHOULD be there? If not, then I'll do a separate article update for the Nepleslian medics and link it within SAW + the medical skills section outlining the new image.

I must have forgot about it since I didn't have any artwork already modified for the new symbol. Totally didn't intend to not insert it.
 
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