As the setting mod for Styrling, I'd like to remind that it does have a sub-section (Kimball Ltd.), that got missed in the overview (limited run super expensive private-request higher-DR equipment). However, that's a minor thing.
As far as the general DR updates that you've listed for the Styrling weaponry, they look good to me. As a GM, I don't tend to use or reference the DR's no matter what version we're on, but in the context of that system, they all look generally well translated.
Since it's also within my right to comment on submissions, I'd actually disagree with Fred here; I think that, for bulk submissions and massive amounts of revisions, this should be the preferred method. It's very easy for everything to get lost, yes, and it's possible the submission mods could miss something in that huge bulk of text, yes - but it also gives us a clear, itemized list of revisions and edits that can be both quick-referenced and quick-searched (with ctrl+f) until they're applied to individual pages. That's important, I think.
Although I hesitate to say this because of the precedent it might set, or the idea it could put in certain people's heads, in this case, if something's come up as too powerful, couldn't there be a request for a separate submission when that's realized?
I therefore think that this method of submission is appropriate for the type of revisions it's attempting to accomplish.
Also echoing Doshii and Gunhand; if you're going to passive-aggressive it up, go do something else with your day.