Gadshack
Inactive Member
Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:demetrius_calloway
Preferred Plot's GM: @Gunhand4171 or @Archander
Preferred Plot's GM: @Gunhand4171 or @Archander
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Abandoned Character Nepleslian Star Navy/Aquila Flight | Demetrius Calloway
- Thread starter Gadshack
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Archander
Inactive Member
Alright, Demetrius is a little barebones but not bad. We can work with this to make him better. Before I list what needs to be fixed, I do have a few questions to ask as far as where you want him to slot into things.
You're going the angle of Engineer which would be a secondary role to the rest of the fighter squadron and wouldn't see as much opportunity to interact... is this the route you want to take?
Is he a marine assigned to the NSN or naval crewman?
Does he have any training with Starfighters (which would mean a skill change)?
You're going the angle of Engineer which would be a secondary role to the rest of the fighter squadron and wouldn't see as much opportunity to interact... is this the route you want to take?
Is he a marine assigned to the NSN or naval crewman?
Does he have any training with Starfighters (which would mean a skill change)?
Gadshack
Inactive Member
Yeah I know he's a little barebones but figured I could flesh him out and work on it as I went along. But yes, please tell inform me of the needed repairs....
You're going the angle of Engineer which would be a secondary role to the rest of the fighter squadron and wouldn't see as much opportunity to interact... is this the route you want to take?
Yes, kinda being a failed hopeful doing the second closest thing to piloting is what I was aiming for with this character
Is he a marine assigned to the NSN or naval crewman?
Naval Crewman
Does he have any training with Starfighters (which would mean a skill change)?
I assumed maintenance, repair, engineering, vehicles, computers, etc could pertain to working with spacecraft, like starfighters. But if a skill change is needed then just tell me which one he needs, or several ones.
You're going the angle of Engineer which would be a secondary role to the rest of the fighter squadron and wouldn't see as much opportunity to interact... is this the route you want to take?
Yes, kinda being a failed hopeful doing the second closest thing to piloting is what I was aiming for with this character
Is he a marine assigned to the NSN or naval crewman?
Naval Crewman
Does he have any training with Starfighters (which would mean a skill change)?
I assumed maintenance, repair, engineering, vehicles, computers, etc could pertain to working with spacecraft, like starfighters. But if a skill change is needed then just tell me which one he needs, or several ones.
Archander
Inactive Member
We can work him in, there's a few NPCs he can work with as well as a few characters he may or pair/group well with.
One of his skills that needs added/replaced is Starship Operation which covers everything from Starfighters and Shuttles clear on up to Capital Ships and Dreadnoughts. Obviously the focus is going to be fighters, but what you want to include after that is up to you. I'd recommend replacing Vehicle Operation for this one.
Rank - Junior Crewman would be the correct rank if a member of the NSN enlisted.
Skills - These can be a little daunting, but these represent what your character is best at whether trained or naturally talented. Don't be afraid to give details to showcase what he knows, or doesn't know.
Pre-RP - This needs to be more than a paragraph, with no unknowns. Pretty much this is meant to be a no holds barred info sheet, or as some put it, God's character sheet. As he's lived a good few years, there should be a lot more detail here than his personality section.
We'll start here for now, any other glaring problems we can cross that bridge next.
One of his skills that needs added/replaced is Starship Operation which covers everything from Starfighters and Shuttles clear on up to Capital Ships and Dreadnoughts. Obviously the focus is going to be fighters, but what you want to include after that is up to you. I'd recommend replacing Vehicle Operation for this one.
Rank - Junior Crewman would be the correct rank if a member of the NSN enlisted.
Skills - These can be a little daunting, but these represent what your character is best at whether trained or naturally talented. Don't be afraid to give details to showcase what he knows, or doesn't know.
Pre-RP - This needs to be more than a paragraph, with no unknowns. Pretty much this is meant to be a no holds barred info sheet, or as some put it, God's character sheet. As he's lived a good few years, there should be a lot more detail here than his personality section.
We'll start here for now, any other glaring problems we can cross that bridge next.
Gunhand4171
The Gunman
