quantumditto
Inactive Member
Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... eyja_signy
Preffered plots GM: kai
Preffered plot: Squad 13
Preffered plots GM: kai
Preffered plot: Squad 13
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Approved Character new character yamatai nekovalkjra
- Thread starter quantumditto
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As GM of the Eucharis, I can't accept this character because my plots is stuffed with players. Also, I feel like the biography has only the minimal amount of effort put into it, giving me concern with regard to both interest and literacy.
The next listed preferred plot is the YSS Sakura II. I am sending its GM, Toshiro, a PM notification to look at the character.
The next listed preferred plot is the YSS Sakura II. I am sending its GM, Toshiro, a PM notification to look at the character.
Kai
Retired Staff
The bones of this character are decent, but I would also like to see a bit more effort put into the page itself in the form of editing- There are numerous spelling errors and numerous punctuation and basic grammar errors, like lower case letters starting a sentence. I also feel that the personality should be fleshed out a little bit more, but as a fresh Neko, the history is fine for the time being.
If you need help with editing, there are people available on our IRC Channel that may be willing to help. I do expect my players to meet a certain standard of grammatical skill, and this Bio currently doesn't quite show it.
Just some more polishing up and it should be ready to go, though.
If you need help with editing, there are people available on our IRC Channel that may be willing to help. I do expect my players to meet a certain standard of grammatical skill, and this Bio currently doesn't quite show it.
Just some more polishing up and it should be ready to go, though.
quantumditto
Inactive Member
My apologies I appear to have let my dyslexia get the better of me.
I think I have corrected all the mistakes but I may have missed some, if i have I apologize in advance.
I think I have corrected all the mistakes but I may have missed some, if i have I apologize in advance.
Kai
Retired Staff
It's alright. I'm aware many people have problems with their typing. Several of our players come from non-english speaking countries and have English as their second language. As long as you know why you have the errors and make an effort to fix or minimize them, you're golden. Thank you for letting me know as well, Having Dyslexia is much more excusable than just being lazy.
