Approved Submission New Dusk Conclave: Character Creation Guide

[Jack Pine]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:faction:ndc:ccg

Submission Faction(s)

1. NDC

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Finally dun it, got my character guide done!

 

[Syaoran]

Okay reading through this;

• You mention the NDC as an abbreviation or full name a few times in the article, but there are no links to it.
• This segment in the first paragraph does not read well

  Since then, Obsidian City, the established capital of the young nation. It has become a home to thriving diverse culture, the study of science, and the harmonious mingling of races from across the Kikyo Sector.

Also you can add Abwehrans to the races if you want.

 

[Jack Pine]

Fixed

Also can I add them to the incorporated species on the faction page as well?

 

[Syaoran]

Yeah you can add them there as well. Abwehrans roam about freely, so as long as you don't block them, they will likely show up from interest in other species.

Went through and fixed some spelling now and removed the second 'maybe' in this sentence

Maybe some sort of experiment character who was the byproduct of a project maybe

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

It's all good, so 3-day approval timmer on this.

 

[Wes]

There are no civilian models of Nekovalkyrja.

 

[Jack Pine]

I thought those who left the SAoY were able to do so, with the caviot that their enhancements were removed/turned off. If this is not the case, then it is my misunderstanding, and therefore my mistake.