Jack Pine
Inactive Member
- Submission URL
- https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:faction:ndc
- Submission Faction(s)
- NDC
- Submission Terms
- I agree
Finally got my faction page done for S6 to officially switch over to being the NDC on the wiki.
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1. Nothing in this paragraph is a complete sentence. Could you rewrite it please?A new and growing nation with a diverse culture, ever advancing technology, a well trained and equipped military, history behind their rise to existence, and a unitary aristocracy style of government to make sure everything runs smoothly. Founded in YE 40 by a organization known as Section 6 to escape to a place where a better society could be formed compared to the one they left.
foul play, unless you're hinting at bird-related shenanigans!In suspected fowl play
Can we get this re-written with grammatically-correct way? (fix the its too).But it was just not felt as genuine until the city was erected, it's day of completion marked with the unveiling of a monument to those who had perished in the exodus.