Approved Character [operation La Prossima] Orianna Paddenmour

[Sosina]

got it I have change out the type 35 the other weapon with the Type 33 (=w=)b

also yes plans will be forthcoming >.>

Edit

okay I have run the Physical description, the History and the personality through a spell and grammer checker

anything else I need to run through it?

 

[demibear]

I have edited it to improve readability. I am not seeing anything else that would stop me unless someone from SAINT wishes to evaluate her.

@Ametheliana @raz

 

[Rizzo]

Looks like a fine character sheet!
I had forgotten how mean that Type 33 is. TR 2-5 make is really flexible.

 

[Ametheliana]

Looks good and well-fleshed out. If she is an armorer that has gone through SAINT training and became an operative, she'd be entitled to have a black panel with SAINT as her occupation. She's a former armorer who is an operative after INDOC.

 

[Sosina]

kk I have edited (=w=)7

 

[demibear]

Approved

 

[Rizzo]

Orianna Paddenmour on Star Army Space Roleplay

wiki.stararmy.com

I went ahead and renamed the page to make our lives a bit easier. Got your thing set up on the plot page.

 

[demibear]

Good catch, most people just already place their characters into that namespace and then mark it as WIP.