This review is for: ASR-27b Sohkohl-class Recon Scout
The submitted article is/hasโฆ
[ ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ ] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
[X] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ ] In the proper format/template
(General arrangement is close to standard but does not use current template)
[ ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
(Couple of errors here and there)
[X] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
(Red links)
[X] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[X] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does notโฆ
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[ ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
A *lot* of Copy pasta in this one.
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[X] Use second-person language (โyouโ or โyourโ) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language (โvirtually immune,โ โnearly indestructible,โ โinsanely powerful,โ โhorrible effectsโ)
[X] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[X]Lacking Detail
The article hasโฆ
[X] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[X] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[X] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[N/A] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
Primarily needs standard format, copypasta removal, links fixed, and art (let me know if you need help with the art)
Status: Pending
(If a military starship)
URL of accompanying civilian ship is: UNKNOWN
I intend to finish this review by: SEPTEMBER 1 2009