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Approved Submission Origin: Karakoram-class

Kai

Retired Staff
Inactive Member
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:origin:karakoram
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Yamatai (except Elysia)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Hokay, this sucker took me almost a month to complete, but here is Origin's Newest (And largest) Mecha carrier! also included are three sub-articles; two crew cabins, as well as the Medium Mecha Bay article. Note that I forgot to put the sub-articles in the WIP namespace- if that's an issue I can move them to it if need be.

*EDIT*
I have put the subarticles into the WIP Namespace via Discord request by @FrostJaeger
 
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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✔️ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ✔️ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ✔️ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ✔️ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✔️ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✔️ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

Nicely written, @Kai and @Alex Hart. (and oh my freaking god that took me nearly five hours to review aaaaaaaaaaaaa)

This review includes the following sub-articles:
 
Just a note of an edit to the ship's page- I forgot to add any way for crew to enter the ship under normal circumstances (IE; docked at a space station) and so under the armored hull and integrated systems I have added a paragraph about armored airlock doors.
 
Another minor edit- Deck two changed from Virtual Reality Deck to Entertainment deck; updated description to include a mini-mart or ship's store for basic luxury items and necessities.
 
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