Approved Submission Origin: Karakoram-class

[Kai]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:origin:karakoram

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Hokay, this sucker took me almost a month to complete, but here is Origin's Newest (And largest) Mecha carrier! also included are three sub-articles; two crew cabins, as well as the Medium Mecha Bay article. Note that I forgot to put the sub-articles in the WIP namespace- if that's an issue I can move them to it if need be.

*EDIT*
I have put the subarticles into the WIP Namespace via Discord request by @FrostJaeger

 

[Wes]

FM approved!

 

[FrostJaeger]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

Nicely written, @Kai and @Alex Hart. (and oh my freaking god that took me nearly five hours to review aaaaaaaaaaaaa)

This review includes the following sub-articles:

• Deluxe Cabin
• Deluxe Suite
• Medium Mecha Bay

 

[Kai]

Awesome! Thank you! It took us a long time to get it right anway!

 

[Kai]

Just a note of an edit to the ship's page- I forgot to add any way for crew to enter the ship under normal circumstances (IE; docked at a space station) and so under the armored hull and integrated systems I have added a paragraph about armored airlock doors.

 

[Kai]

Another minor edit- Deck two changed from Virtual Reality Deck to Entertainment deck; updated description to include a mini-mart or ship's store for basic luxury items and necessities.