Approved Character [P3C Nepleslia]Delmar Rey Morro

[Rizzo]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:delmar_rey_morro

 

[Syaoran]

You're supposed to make this a wiki page. Then link to it here.

 

[Kyle]

Hey there Rizzo, I fixed your character page and added it to the wiki:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:delmar_rey_morro

You'll need to fix the user link.

 

[Rizzo]

Thank you. I was trying to fix it and got busy. This site is very different from what I'm used to.

 

[Wes]

@Sigma - tagging 4th Fleet's GM

 

[Rizzo]

Thank you, Wes. I've contacted him and offered to use Marro as a CQB guy to fill the space.

 

[Sigma]

So there's only four skills listed. If you want to add 3 more to flesh out the character, that'd be fine. Characters can have up to seven to start with. In addition, if you're going to be in CQB, I'd like to have some more explicit mention of that in your Fighting Skill section.

Also, your finances section is incorrectly formatted. I don't have time now but if someone else can't help you with it between now and Saturday, I'll have a look at it on Saturday.

Also, @Wes I don't have any notification that you mentioned me. It's been something that I've noticed for a while now. Every time you tag me, I don't see any notification about it. And I've got the setting to alert me if I get tagged.

 

[Rizzo]

@Sigma I've worked out the issues you showed me. I'll be making edits and updates to this character as I have time but I think he's ready

 

[Sigma]

Oh! I just realized, as a hybrid ID-SOL/Nepleslian, he should probably be a bit taller than 1.8 metres. https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=species:id-sol

 

[Rizzo]

Thanks for the link. I adjusted his size. Can you see any other issues?

 

[Sigma]

Nope, no other issues that I can see. Clear by me.

 

[CadetNewb]

@Kyle , @Nashoba , @Wes

I'm sorry to bug you guys, but the character's good to move into the approved area.