Approved Submission [Pact] NT-560UM 'Vedma' Light Transport

[Arieg]

Submission Type: Light Aerospace Transport
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:nt_560_vedma#standard_equipment

Faction: Colonial Pact
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: The containerized launcher system and all the sensor articles need to be reviewed as well.

 

[Ametheliana]

Can you give the launcher system and sensor articles their own submission threads?

 

[Arieg]

Apologies that should have been sub articles, effectively everything on this page needs to be reviewed, https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:valmet_colonial_pact:common_pact_systems with the exception of the last two yellow links.

 

[Ametheliana]

I will not be doing so. @CadetNewb?

 

[Arieg]

Actually scratch that forgot about the ones that got approved via the missile articles, posting the sub articles to the NTSE now.

 

[Ametheliana]

On hold until sub articles are approved.

 

[Arieg]

On hold until sub articles are approved.

Pending the sub articles, are there any items on the article itself that may hold it back from approval?

 

[FrostJaeger]

Pending the sub articles, are there any items on the article itself that may hold it back from approval?

The following, in my humble opinion, would prevent this submission from being approved:

• This submission does not adhere to the Starship Speed Standards (as it's able to travel at the ludicrous speed of 3.5 light-years per minute), despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.
• This submission does not include the proper nomenclature, despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.
• This submission is manufactured by an unapproved corporation.
• This submission does not list the current year as the year it was first produced, despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.

Furthermore, I, FrostJaeger, would like to politely request that the consequences for not following the Submission Rules be enforced upon @Arieg due to the fact many of his submissions - including nearly all of the ones that were approved - violate the aforementioned rules. In lieu of or in combination with the aforementioned consequences, I would also like to request that a submission moratorium be placed upon @Arieg until the approved and currently-under-review articles in the following list are brought into line with the Submission Rules.

Spoiler: List of Articles

Spoiler: Key

1. This article does not include the proper nomenclature, despite being required to by the Submission Rules.
2. This article does not adhere to the proper template, despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.
3. This article is extremely difficult to read on mobile devices due to its non-standard formatting.
4. This article does not comply with the Starship Combat Guide's Engagement Range Guidelines.
5. This article does not list the current year as the year it was first released, despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.
6. This article does not list a valid or approved manufacturer.
7. This article does not adhere to the speeds established in the Starship Speed Standard and/or the Damage Rating (Version 3), despite being required to do so by the Submission Rules.

• Valmet Self Governing Colonial Region of the Colonial Pact (VSGCR)
  • Approved Articles
    • 1N78 Smart Holosight: 1, 3, 5, 6
    • ML2A4 30mm Hypervelocity Rapid Cycle Plasma Cannon (HRCPC 'Herc Pecs'): 1, 3, 4, 5, 6
    • P-1000UMK 'Starburn' Long Range Attack Missile (LRAM): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • S-500KM 'Asper' Medium Range Surface/Air to Air Missile (MRSAAM): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • S-850TU 'Atrop' Short Range Surface/Air to Air Missile (SRSAAM): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • V100N 'Voz' Micro Missile: 1, 3, 6
    • V120PR 'Molok' Lightweight Attack Missile (LAM): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Combined Barrier Array: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Passive Electronic Monitoring Array (PEMA): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Exotic Waveform and Particle Detection Identification and Tracking System (EWPDITS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact High Energy Waveform Detection and Ranging System (HEWDRS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Laser Initiated Staged Solid Fuel Thermonuclear Motor (LISTM): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Spacial Field and Gravitational Mapping System (SFGM): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact UV-VL-IR Optical Sensor Type System: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Active Laser Ranging and Tracking (ALRT) System: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact DMAESA Radar System: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact ESC-78 Lightweight Hardened Standardized Computer Class: 1, 5, 6
    • GWP-88M/RUP Modular Armor Plasma Rifle: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • Valmet Self Governing Colonial Region of the Colonial Pact (VSGCR): 2
    • Government of the Valmet Self Governing Colonial Region: 3
    • Cerrosteel: 3, 6
    • Kylar Polymer: 3, 6
    • Decasteel: 3, 6
    • Ensteel: 3, 6
    • Valadyne: 3, 6
  • Unapproved Articles
    • M1960/M1984-A9 Multi-Service Field Uniform (MSFU): 5, 6
    • Helka-Alpha Celestial and Planetary Bodies: 2, 3
    • 0N90 50mm Dual Purpose Smart Munitions Launcher (DPSML): 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • 7n85 'Visker' 205mm Plasma Cannon: 1, 3
    • 7n88 'Bozar' 127mm Plasma Cannon: 1, 3, 4, 5, 6
    • 7n90 'Basso' 355mm Plasma Cannon: 1, 3
    • 97NR 8x60mm Discarding Rail Accelerator Sabot Caseless Rifle Cartridge (DRAS-CRC): 2, 5, 6
    • 9n22 'Vesper' 850mm Heavy Plasma Cannon: 1, 3
    • 9n80 'Vaego' 1500mm Heavy Plasma Cannon: 1, 3
    • 57NR 12x63.5mm Non-Linear Kinetic Projectile: 2, 5, 6
    • 54N Family of 50mm Diameter Launched Munitions: 2, 5, 6
    • AT-102MU 'Gabon' Anti-Tank Missile: 1, 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Intelligence Service Agency (CISA)-Valmet Theater of Operations: 3
    • Colonial Pact Army of the VSGCR: 3
    • Colonial Pact Canisterized Life Support (CLS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Compact Life Support System (CLSS): 1, 5, 6
    • Valmet Inter-System Security And Patrol (VISSP-'Visp'): 3
    • Colonial Pact Marine Corps of the VSGCR: 3
    • Colonial Pact Naval Force of the VSGCR: 3
    • ENQ-607 Series 3 Standard Sub-System Computing Mainframe (SSS3/CM): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • ENQ-778V Series 6 Compact Carbon-60 Quantum Computing System: 1, 5, 6
    • ENQ-901 Series 7 Single Carbon-60 Quantum Computing Mainframe (SC-60/QCM): 1, 5, 6
    • Helka-Alpha Star System: 2, 3
    • Helka-Beta Star System: 2, 3
    • Helka-Gamma Star System: 2, 3
    • Helka Trinary Star System: 2, 3
    • Helka Star System: 2, 3
    • Rostok-class Project K588 Guided Missile Corvette: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • Gleist-class Project K666 Guided Missile Frigate: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • Fromm-class Project K784 Guided Missile Destroyer: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • Kaar General Resources Corporation - Valmet Sector Branch (KGR-VSB): 2, 3
    • AT-500LM 'Strela' Multi-Purpose Missile: 1, 3, 5, 6
    • MIG-338 'Orzel' Multi-Role Interceptor and Ground Attack Fighter: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • ML4A6 40mm Optical Rapid Focus Rapid Impulse X-Ray Band Laser Cannon: 1, 5, 6
    • ML5A2 50mm Hypervelocity Rapid Cycle Plasma Cannon (HRCPC): 1, 3
    • ML6A5 100mm Hyper Compression Plasma Cannon (HCPC): 1, 3
    • ML7A3 15mm Rotary Rapid Cycle Plasma Cannon (RRCPC): 1, 3
    • ML12A2 120mm Asynchronous Rapid Cycle Linear Cannon (ARCLC)
    • NL-71 Assault Rifle: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • NT-560UM 'Vedma' Light Transport: 1, 5, 6, 7
    • NZZ-72BM 'Tigr' Standard Assault Armor (SAA): 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 7
    • NZZ-102M 'Kortik' Lightweight Assault Power Armor (LAPA): 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 7
    • Oppon Ship-works and Foundry Corporation: 2, 3
    • Colonial Pact Common Antimatter Power Cell (CAPC): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Callenite Energy Capacitor (CCEC): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Fission Thermal Battery (CFTB): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Faster-Than-Light Drive (CFTLD): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Gravitic Repulsion Drive (CGRD): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Dual Capability Laser Communication Systems (DCLCS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Liquid Fuel Fusion Reactor (CLFFR): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Dual Capability Radio Communication Systems (DCRCS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Solid Fuel Fusion Cell (CSFFC): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Magnetically Initiated Staged Fusion Drive (CMISFD): 1, 5, 6
    • 906RV 'Shershen' Modular Launch System: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Mobile Decoy Drone Systems (MDDS): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Flare and Chaff Systems: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Dual Occupant Cabin: 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Main Washroom Compartment: 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Standard Medical Kit: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Common Multispectral Active Jammer (CMAJ): 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Primary Laundry Compartment: 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Standard Damage Control Types: 1, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Single Occupant Cabin: 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Small Medical Compartment: 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact Twelve Man Compartment: 5, 6
    • S-400U 'Bothrop' Light Anti-Aircraft Missile: 1, 3
    • S-1000U 'Naja' Long Range Surface/Air to Air Missile (LRSAAM): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • Planet Santa-Torga Prime (Santa-Torga II): 2, 3
    • Sn90VN 'Starfish-1' Advanced Heavyweight Advanced Torpedo (A-HAT): 1, 3, 5, 6
    • T-505UM 'Fenris' Main Battle Tank: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • T-580 'Berko' Light Tracked Armored Assault Vehicle (LTAAV): 1, 2, 3, 5, 6
    • Colonial Pact - Valmet Self Governing Colonial Region (VSGCR) Economy: 3
    • Valmet Region Armed Forces: 3
• Oshima National Industries
  • Approved Articles
    • ONI 15cm Type-39 Rapid Fire Anti-Particle Cannon: 1, 3, 4
    • ONI 2.5cm Type-39 Rapid Cycle Plasma Cannon: 1, 3, 4
    • Oshima National Industries: 2, 3
    • Hades Star System: 2, 3
  • Unapproved Articles
    • Indigo-Class Guided Missile Frigate (GMF): 2
    • ONI/APS-55 Antimatter Auxiliary Power Pack (AAPP): 1, 3
    • ONI/APS-75 Emergency Fission Power Source (EFPS): 1, 3
    • ONI/EFS-700 Series Family Of Fusion Drive Systems: 1
    • ONI 'Kinpa' Common Ship Mainframe System: 1, 5
    • Kno-22C Gravitic Atmospheric Flight Module: 1, 3
    • Kno-9S Quantum Fold Drive: 1, 3
    • ONI/LSP-08 'Stackable' Modular Life Support System: 1, 3
    • ONI-OCSN-02 Infrared Multi-Array Optical Communications System: 1, 3
    • ONI-RCSN-03 Narrow Band Digitally Modulated Radio Communications System: 1, 3
    • ONI-RCSN-05 Frequency Agile Digitally Modulated Radio Communications System: 1, 3
    • ONI-RXN-01 Frequency Agile Digitally Modulated Sub-Space Radio: 1, 3
    • ONI-RXN-02 Point to Point Quantum Communications System: 1, 3
    • ONI-SBN-5 Emergency Shipboard Communications System: 1, 3
    • ONI-SBN-7 Shipboard Wireless Communications Network: 1, 3
    • ONI-SBN-8 Hardline Communication System: 1, 3
    • ONI/ANZ-03 Electronic Monitoring Intelligence and Warning System (EMIWS): 1, 3
    • ONI/GCFE-01 Gravimetric Barrier Shield Emitter: 1, 3
    • ONI/HSSA-30 Hyperspectral Networked Optical Array: 1, 3
    • ONI/PCFE-05 Plasma Field Emitter: 1, 3
    • ONI/SAR-01 Subspace Augmented Superluminal Dual Mode Phased Array (SASDMPA): 1, 3
    • ONI/SPS-36 Spacial Sensor Package (SSP): 1, 3
    • ONI/EPDS-02 Exotic Particle Detection Network: 1, 3
    • ONI/PF-101 Modular Shipboard Fusion Reactor (MSFR): 1, 3
    • ONI Standardized Damage Control Package (SDCP): 1
    • ONI-DPW-01 Particle Personal Defense Weapon: 1, 2, 3
    • Zen/ONI-ECQ-24 Terabyte Range Frequency Agile Radio Datalink: 1, 3
    • ONI-ECQ-36 Infrared Laser Point to Point Datalink: 1, 3
    • Huyo-2 Escape/Drop Pod: 1, 2, 3
    • Oshiman National Authority: 2, 3
    • ONI/LM-01 'Boruto' Modular Shipboard Launch System: 1, 3
    • ONI 'Aino' Common Modular Quantum Computer Suite: 1
    • ONI Command And Control Center (CIC): 1, 3
    • ONI Light Bridge: 1
    • OOZ-Type Bathroom and Wash Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Captain Suite: 3
    • OOZ-Type Single Cabin: 3
    • OOZ-Type Small Canteen Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Small Medical Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Standard Canteen Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Standard Medical Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Ten-person Barrack Compartment: 3
    • OOZ-Type Two-person Compartment: 3
    • ONI-ENCQ-85 Modular Processor Block: 1, 3
    • Zen/ONI-AQ-35 Dual Mode Search Track and Engagement Phased Array Radar: 1, 3
    • ONI-AQ-60 Sub-Space Augmented Dual Mode Micro Phased Array Radar (SADMPAR): 1, 3
    • ONI-HSSA-24 Hyperspectral Lightweight Optical Sensor: 1, 3
    • Zen/ONI-OQ-21 Multi-Spectral Search Track and Targeting System (MSSTTS): 1, 3
    • Zen/Oni-PQ-23 Exotic Waveform Field Particle Sensor Package: 1, 3
• Zen Armaments
  • Approved Articles
    • Zen ZA-MGSS-155 155mm Plasma Cannon: 1, 3, 4
    • Zen Armaments: 2, 3
    • ZA-FWR-01 10mm Selective Mode Rail Rifle (SMRR): 1, 2, 3
  • Unapproved Articles
    • ZA-MK1 Mod-1 155mm Linear Gun System: 1, 3, 4
    • ZA-MK3 Mod-1 350mm Heavy Magma Driver Gun System: 1, 3, 4

 

[CadetNewb]

Sorry for not stopping by sooner. Do you still need me @Ametheliana ?

EDIT:

Ok, I just took a good look at the main page of the submissions. Well, it's a learning process. In the future, it's best to just leave all the sub-articles in the main thread, and not have them separate. I'll take a few pot shots at them sometime today.

 

[Ametheliana]

If you want to review this I'm happy to let you.

 

[Arieg]

@META_mahn @Arbitrated @CadetNewb Anyone?

 

[FrostJaeger]

@Arieg - Please do not attempt to rush the review process, as doing so is prohibited by Rule #4 of the Submission Rules' section on Permission Restriction & Consequences for not following Submission Rules.

4. Do not try to rush the review process. This includes but is not limited to bumping threads and/or harassing the reviewer in chatrooms by spamming the link to your approval thread.




 

[META_mahn]

As this has already been claimed by Ame (and possibly Cadet) I can't review this.

 

[Ametheliana]

It has not been claimed by me.

 

[Ametheliana]

@CadetNewb Is this you? If not I'll take it.

 

[CadetNewb]

I'll go ahead and review it.

 

[CadetNewb]

What's the rate of fire on those 30mm guns when mounted on this vehicle? I'll need to take that into consideration. The rest of it looks good, and chances are, I'll approve the subsystems along with the ship.

 

[Arieg]

Added in combined 3500 RPM ROF.

 

[FrostJaeger]

@CadetNewb - based upon the Star Army of Yamatai's starship speeds, shouldn't the Vedma have at most a FTL speed of 0.50 light-years per minute?

 

[CadetNewb]

So that's 58 rounds per second combined, and 29 rounds individually?