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In general, the system looks ok, but the more I read on it all, the more I have a feeling that this is part of something much bigger that simply isn't linked to here. We'll have to do something about that, I think.
Who is Dantarius? A little bit of context of who he is/was, such as maybe being an Elysian, astronomer, etc, would help out readers who aren't familiar with any of this
Link to Vice earlier in the article as well
What's the Crown? It sounds important, and even in the Vice page, I had to do a little bit of digging to figure it out - I suggest either making The Crown a subsection of the Vice article, or having a subarticle that explains it. The reason for this is, unlike a word such as Shogun/Shogunate, this is something that looks very specific to Vice
Include the current owner of the system
What are these royal houses being referenced? If you have an article for those, please link to them.