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S.P.I.N.E System

Truth

Truth

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Well, this is my first attempt at creating a product, I hope it goes over well. Although, criticism and advice are always appriciated. I checked over the spelling the best I could, even I make some mistakes and I tried to follow the rules, I might have missed a few. Although, I couldn't figure out the damage table thing, I thought that only applied to Power Armor, hope to clear all of that up! Thank you!
 
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What engines does it have to make it go that fast?
 
One small thing...could you please breakup the Appearance into smaller paragraphs? It is just a wall of text, and hard to read.
 
Truth said:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ever_suit
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This is where I got it from. You seem to be updating the original article, which you placed in the User section (specifically, "user:s.p.i.n.e."). That was supposed to be either moved or deleted. Your third post had the link quoted above, with the correctly formatted page address (which also changes the article to the EvER suit instead of the SPINE). Which one are you going to keep?
 
Okay, it's called the EvER Suit and the only link up is the one at the top of this page. S.P.I.N.E was already taken.
 
I know it's called the EvER suit.

You need to update the EvER page.

Wes needs to delete the S.P.I.N.E. page, since that is abandoned. You should stop making changes to that "link at the top of the page" because that is the wrong link. Since I know you're going to either ask why or try to argue with that, here is my reason:

The article for the EvER suit should NOT be on the S.P.I.N.E. page. You already have an EvER page, USE IT.

This is what I'm trying to tell you.
 
Alright, no need to go caps on me. I'm telling you I have been using the EvER page. Maybe it's been a technical error on my part, all I know is that I've been updating that page.
 
[BIG EDIT!] I think I know what you're saying!

Truth, if you're looking at the _title_ (is underlining better than caps for you?) then, yeah, it says it's the "EvER" page. But what I'm telling you (and telling you again, below) is that the _address_ is for the S.P.I.N.E. System. Check the links I give below and see the difference.
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This is the one you should be updating:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ever_suit

As of 12:40 AM, today, that page is the same as when I posted the errors to it earlier. No change has been made to it from the time you first posted that link to the "ever_suit". This is what I linked to earlier and you said:

Truth said:
Er... Where are you getting all of these errors and such? And where are you getting a speed bonus from? I am looking at my link and it doesn't say any of that. I also decreased the structural value to 2.

Here's a real link if you need it...

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=us ... n.e_system
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I repeat once more, hoping you'll understand this time, that link you're giving, this one...

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=us ... n.e_system

...needs everything on it transferred to this page...

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ever_suit

...and then this one...

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=us ... n.e_system

...can be deleted. See the words "user:s.p.i.n.e_system" in the address? Your device is no longer called the s.p.i.n.e_system, which you said here:

Truth said:
Okay, it's called the EvER Suit and the only link up is the one at the top of this page. S.P.I.N.E was already taken.
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...which is why that page ( https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=us ... n.e_system ) needs gone. So this page (https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ever_suit) can replace it and take its rightful place as the focus of this submission.

Do you understand now? Or are you just playing with me because you like seeing me frustrated and repeating myself like a broken record with a larger vocabulary?

Or, better yet, can someone else take care of this? Wes? It'd be kids' work for you to transfer all the info on the old page to the new one and remove old page. I could do it if I was able to delete pages, but at this point I'd settle for the info transfer, but I haven't gotten Truth's permission to touch his page. If you do this, Truth wouldn't need to do anything else. All those errors I had? They're all on the current ever_suit page. Once the s.p.i.n.e_system info is moved over to the ever_suit page, I'm okay with it being approved! Not that my opinion really mattered, but just sayin'...


*sighs*
 
*Smacks head* Oh geeze! I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to make you frustrated or anything like that. I guess I didn't see the address. I'm really, really sorry. I'll go and make the changes right now. Dang it, all those pages are deleted now..
 
Nice! As soon as I thought it, I knew that you weren't looking at the address! And it looks like Wes took care of the wiki, all the info on the old page is now on the ever_suit page!

It's all good now : )
 
A suggestion, though I'm not a contributor or owner of Styrling, is that Styrling manufactures your suit since it doesnt share enough common components of NAM suits. Styrling is an up-and-coming company that can use additional designs and designers. If you wish to take my suggestion, talk to Exhack.

I dont see any faults with the Ever suit, and in fact I think such a design is overdue. Would you believe that the current utility suit of the SMoDIN is a two-man power armor? Ahaha. The civvies will lap it up though.

We have not met before, welcome to the SARP. ;)
 
Heh, alright. Well, thank you Wes and thank you MissingNo for clearing that up for me!

Nice to meet you Fian, and thank you for the welcome. Although, I am still waiting for orders to be passed through and all that. Thank you. Well, I would have Styrling or ask them too. This suit is of Isaac's creation and it's not supposed to be mass produced for everyone as of now.

Now then... *Waits for approval*
 
Approved for individual use.
 
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