ShadowWalker
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- https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:uso:scarecrows:scarecrows_service_carbine
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Approved Submission Scarecrows Service Carbine
- Thread starter ShadowWalker
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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
Status: Pending
This review includes the following sub-articles:
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- Would you mind adding an ammunition chart (see the spoiler below for the code) to the Replaceable Parts and Components section, please?
- Would you mind increasing the price of the Scarecrows Service Carbine to 400 DA, please? A price of 300 DA, in my official opinion, is a bit too cheap for a weapon of this type.
- Would you mind adding a note to the OOC Notes that says the gun's artwork was made using Gunstruction, please?
- Would you mind adding some text to the "Muzzle Blast" bullet point in the Stats sub-section, please?
- @Legix, @Jack Pine, and @Zack - the respective Faction Managers of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia, Section 6, and Uso's Star Organization - need to post their approval of the submission in this thread.
Status: Pending
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Code:
==== Ammunition ====
^ [[wip:ammunition:slag_ammo|Slag Ammo]] Price Quickchart ^^
^ Type ^ Price (100 Round Box) ^
| [[wip:ammunition:slag_ammo|Slag Ammo]] | XX [[faction:nepleslia:economy:da]] |
ShadowWalker
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Sorry I mistook your faction for the nepsilion race
Now, I'm no expert but I think the art for this is made with Gunstruction. There's not anything on their site that says that you can use images, but also not anything that says you can't. I'd suggest at least crediting them since you used their stuff to make it.
ShadowWalker
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I will credit them also it's free use software also almost done with the edits
ShadowWalker
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Also jack I was adding you because you said you were wanting a version of the ammo for one of your guns as well
ShadowWalker
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Ok edits are finished
Thanks for making the requested edits in such a timely manner, Esscast! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
This review includes the following sub-articles:
[
] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- @Zack, the Faction Manager of Uso's Star Organization, needs to post his approval of the submission in this thread.
This review includes the following sub-articles:
ShadowWalker
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Frost you may want to message him on discord since he got banned from sarp for a week
ShadowWalker
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Ok
IQ
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Isn't the acting FM of USO @Jack Pine - Frost?
ShadowWalker
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Yah that is what I thought
I disagree, but that's my personal opinion, ergo: Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
This review includes the following sub-articles:
[
] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[
] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread[
] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki[
] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to[
] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section[
] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)This review includes the following sub-articles:
