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Here's the next big ship in the Mining Guild Fleet, now taking the position of their first Frigate. Also included in the submission is the Recorm bots, which is a part of the ship as a sub article. Also to reiterate what i said in the pages, the art was created using copilot.
The opening line at the top should be shortened to a precise sentence as to what exactly this is. Art credits go in the OOC section of the article. (Feel free to message me
The entire article has a lot of missed opportunities for wikification. The names, places, factions, and things like that can all be wikified to better link this article into the wiki thus making it more relevant.
There are places with multiple headings with very little information between them that could be reduced to information displayed under a single heading making the article more condensed and easy to read. (Appearance section)
The crew information can be condensed into a table or more compact way of displaying that information as well.
The weapons should have their DR displayed.
I sent you no background versions of the images with a white background this morning.
I made some edits here, and moved art credits to the bottom of the article.
The entire article has a lot of missed opportunities for wikification. The names, places, factions, and things like that can all be wikified to better link this article into the wiki thus making it more relevant.
I tried to go over and add some links as requested
There are places with multiple headings with very little information between them that could be reduced to information displayed under a single heading making the article more condensed and easy to read. (Appearance section)
Seeing as how this is a Mining Guild starship being developed not in cooperation with the NDC, I would say that it's probably unlikely that it would have access to the NDC's proprietary starfighters for usage. I can make some suggestions for which fighters might be easy for the Mining Guild to purchase locally, if you like. It may be worth figuring out how many fighters this ship can manage to carry.
The Starbreakers are under the Black Wing Enterprise namespace, and likely too will the Starbreaker updates, which need NTSE approval, on the original thread. In the updates i have included Conclave shipworks, and Mining Guild Engineering corps, as manufacturers, and it would be possible to have Mining guild purchase additional Starbreakers.
If needed you are welcome to negotiate a purchase from Yugumo @Charaa
Normally I wouldn't pipe in here, but I think that the weapons section of the ship, as well as how many fighters and shuttles it can carry, ought to be clarified. A lot of the things there are unwikified, since it's raw gpt output. I know that this is a long article, and mostly AI generated, but it should probably still be held to the same formatting, wikification, and detail requirements as a hand-written article.