Couple things.
One, make sure you correct things everywhere they are in the future, not just in one place. The height/weight have both been fixed now, but you forgot to modify the character card at the top.
Under build, what kind of muscular is he? There's a major difference between bodybuilder muscular and runner muscular, for example.
You can just delete the ears category if there's nothing special about them.
Pretty much everything in the hair category needs to be removed except the very first line. That's referring to the hair style, not his overall style.
You also need to fill in the Distinguishing Characteristics area. Everyone has something that sets them apart from a crowd, even if it's just that they're completely and utterly ordinary. If nothing else, his scars.
Couple things under history. First, it's a bit touchy for him to have been sold to the Black Syndicate. Even if they did a bit of human trading back then, they've always been more focused on the inventory side of things. Weapons, equipment, tools, money, that kind of stuff. It would make more sense for it to just be one of the nameless many among the gangs of Nepleslia instead of the Blacks.
Second line of the second paragraph, do you mean a corporation account? Cooperation fund makes a lot less sense.
I also feel obliged to point out that not only are bullet wound splash ballistics a serious profession, so it's doubtful he'd know how to properly read them, it's also, well... not uncommon for someone to get shot in Funky City. Life on the lower end of the spectrum in funky city is pretty risky, to be honest.
The bit about the Marines taking him to the hospital is also a bit off, but that's possible, so that can slide.
In Survival, it's knack, not nack.
Electrical Engineering is just... wrong. On many levels. Most electrical engineers have little to do at all with computer systems. Computer engineers, in modern day alone, are a very separate discipline from electrical engineering, let alone at the distant level that SARP is at where computers have developed to that point.
Inventory, the line about the handguns needs to be tweaked. You still have the part about choosing which gun in there, just need to remove that and tick the next line back a line spacing.
Pretty good, just needs a little tweaking.