Approved Submission [Shasta No Sekai] Flyswatter Mech

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

Submission RP Example

https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/shasta-no-sekai-17-hour-karaoke-stream-highlights-ultrachat-readout.69841/

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:shasta_no_sekai:terror_wolf_project:flyswatter

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Laser Guided Laser on Star Army Space Roleplay

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Submission Faction(s)

1. Outlaws (Independent)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Old revision brought back to actually submit. Its a mech with a laser that is guided by lasers and shoots down small animals, powered armor, aircraft, etc.

 

[Andrew]

Looks good, the same issue as the previous submission - a minor quality issue which is it would be great if a sentence or so of prose could be put between the headings and the bullet lists in the following sections: Key Features, Statistical Information, Speeds. Other than that looks good. Address that minor cosmetic and I will put a stamp on it.

 

[Andrew]

3-day approval timer.​

 

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

Requested changes have been made

 

[Andrew]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread