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Approved Submission [Shasta] Star Paint

Charmaylarg Dufrain

FM of Nepleslia
Game Master
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:shasta_no_sekai:star_paint
Submission Faction(s)
Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
I agree
based off of this that i saw one day. Its essentially a super bright pigment/paint that can absorb and reflect light even after its light source has been cut off. Ill eventually expand on it for specific stuff such as maybe something that can be used to hide your face from a camera for spook work, Or as some kind of solar absorbing charger just by having this applied, But this is it for now.


If every thing the corp makes is going to have some glowy bits on it its easier to make a page for the glowy bits than to try to explain it every time~

Also its lightly radioactive...
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ❌ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

Spelling:
"can will glow" maybe you meant can and will?
"YE:40" Just say YE 40 and link it, please.
"shinned" shined

The Strays is linked but not approved (and also not in a wip: namespace). Also that guy in the Strays mentioned in the article: me.

Great addition!!
 

Charmaylarg Dufrain

FM of Nepleslia
Game Master
was the strays not approved? I linked it as an unapproved sub article with the main corp assuming it was bunched together?

Edit.
I fixed the requested spelling mistakes these hamburger hands of mine have made. And changed the strays reference to just be "The security team".

Why do we add sub articles to submissions if they aren't included in the review process?~
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
You are right, they were approved with the main corp article. The thing is, when I looked, they had a wip tag at the top of the page, so I hurt myself in my confusion, there. Go ahead and re-link strays in the paint article. Sorry for possibly confusing you, too.

Approved
 
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