Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
Spelling:
"can will glow" maybe you meant can and will?
"YE:40" Just say YE 40 and link it, please.
"shinned" shined
The Strays is linked but not approved (and also not in a wip: namespace). Also that guy in the Strays mentioned in the article: me.
Great addition!!