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Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) Yes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) No
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) no
Contains New art? (Yes/No) no
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) no
Notes: I wanted some skintight flight suits for the USO and sky guard.
I want to make this better for the next submission of it, so lets compare this to something like the origin armored pilot suit. Is it that it has too many headers? I wanted to include those to make it more clear, but I don't see how they detract from the quality. Also, I feel that I went in to a fair amount of detail for a simple flight suit.
I want to make this better for the next submission of it, so lets compare this to something like the origin armored pilot suit. Is it that it has too many headers? I wanted to include those to make it more clear, but I don't see how they detract from the quality. Also, I feel that I went in to a fair amount of detail for a simple flight suit.
I still feel that it went into a fair amount of detail for a flight suit. I could try to describe it better, but I'm no fashion designer and I don't think it would be very good.
@Alex Hart, you need to put text underneath every header. Also, I'd suggest adding details about the helmet's appearance: colors, what the visor looks like, any patterns or obvious antennae, etc.
When adding details, think about breaking each physical part down into its own compartmentalized description (in addition to what you already have).