Too chesty for her height, not mentioning her model. I'd suggest a Yamataian really, or just scaling back to a B. I do however like the eye color a lot.
You could mention her manufacturer's tattoos at the least for features I suppose.
Use 'their ignorance' not 'there ignorance' as well.
Don't capitalize things in a list unless it's called for, putting and at the last of them is also standard.
I'm seeing a bit too much history for a lower ranking enlistee. It's also highly improbable that anything but an officer or senior NCO would teach officer candidates at the academy. You could try basic training if it's that important. The other training would strike me as something that would be learned in a more standard fashion, though.
The proper abbreviation for the Star Army is YSA.
Might want to tone down her skills, they need to be rp'd out some. Though it doesn't seem like she could take apart a KAMI and put it back together blindfolded anyway. Not looking bad so far, still.