Good thing someone linked me to this thread, because I didn't receive any notifications.
Wes, fix the forum please.
Anyway,
@DrunkenFrog, Bounty Hunts is, unfortunately, on full capacity at the moment and on the middle of a mission, so I'm afraid I'll have to refuse your character unless you want me to put him in the backburner. Nonetheless, I'll just do a quick review of it,
Appearance: @Wes, the art is from Destiny, so I'm pretty sure the TOS don't allow it to be used on the wiki.
You never mentioned what type of Freespacer he is. Is he a Type 3 or a Type 4? I'd recommend talking to
@Lamb, since he's the current Freespacer FM and the guy yous should get any questions you have answered
Psychological Characteristics: It's a single paragraph, and it tells me little about the character other than he's a passive pacifist, but not quite. You should write more about how the Freespace
Genocide influenced him, for example, since he was created before that happened.
History: The character bio is supposed to be an OOC document, which is why we don't allow for the creators to be labelled as "unknown", for example. Please point out which mercenary group created Quicksilver, since there's quite a few of them made up of Freespacers (The IWL, or the Opportunistics Social Club comes to mind). Also, as pointed out by Wes, the
Genocide happened 8 years ago, ICly, so what has your character been doing that whole time?
Skills: Quicksilver only knows 3 skills, even though you're allowed to start with 7 on your first character. Furthermore, you should describe them more with at least a paragraph.
Inventory: The Wiki broke your format and the items aren't listed.
Finances: You're allowed to start with 6000DA (3000KS), but that's not an issue due to the chracter bio.
Hope that helps.