You know, at first I was like eh, furries.
And then I was like earperk, tentative tail wag, sniff sniff.
More fluff is good. I do have a question though, which is wasn't some illegal stuff run through this business at some point if it's attached to that character? I can recall you talking about something like that but I might just be blending conversations in memory.
Here's my suggestions:
- The years need to be links
- The interiors should be described
- Add prices for entry, dances, etc.
- There needs to be more meat to this article overall, as it's currently just a 1-paragraph stub article.
- Move this to NSFW if it's going to have NSFW images or the text is too sexy.
My one thing is make the wording "mutant". Because of the fact that anthro, within Nepleslia, are viewed as mutants (they try to blend into that sub-culture after all). Anthro fit into it and it makes the most sense that Nepleslia had that happen versus specifically anthro.Here's my suggestion:
This would be something I could work with as Nepleslian FM.
- It started as a single generic strip club in YE 31 in Funky City Nepleslia
- At some point it got some anthros in there, for variety's sake.
- It eventually become known for them.
- It moved to Asteria in YE 39, and closed the original location.
- In YE 40 it opened multiple locations for the first time, becoming a franchise.
I will not allow you to back-date a franchise or chain.
In YE 31, Nekovalkyrja didn't have tails.I can do all but the not anthro at the beginning, would ruin the joke of the name "Tail Chasers" what with Neko being illegal in Nepleslia.
That just goes to ruin the joke furtherIn YE 31, Nekovalkyrja didn't have tails.
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