Okay, thank you,
@Aendri. I will address some of the points here and update the ones I don't as soon as I can.
My first address: since her children were born Plebians and, as such, subject to childhood diseases because, in the written history it was stated that Plebians were imperfect and, therefore, as many as possible were moved from those bodies to the new Caelisolans, then what could have killed them?
I get that this site and this universe is trying hard to not have anything that could medically go wrong. It's so advanced that even cancer is cured. Awesome! Kudos! But let's also think about it this way: Can the science of medicine truly eradicate everything that goes wrong with a body genetically? Even today, we have the flu vaccine. And yet, people who do take it, still get the flu and, in some very rare cases, die. They could be healthy as a horse, and yet it still happens. It's not an epidemic. It's not something that happens to a huge population. But it happens.
Same with childhood diseases. Or even childhood cancers. It happens. Is it life changing for the ones going through it? Of course it is! But the point I'm making is that her children died. So what do you think would or could have happened in that sense?
My second address: Skills for engineering require one to know Math and Physics and even some Science. They can all be tied in together because the Math and Physics needed would be geared towards Engineers. I know this because I was in those classes myself for Software Engineering. Unless I needed more skills to flesh out, then there's no point in me separating them.
Third address: Parents. I get that you all want to have as detailed a thing when it comes to family, including parents, but she is 35 years old. What would be the point of having ANYTHING about them in her bio? You all approve those with nothing about parents other than a simple line, which I had tried with my first character, of "knows nothing about the parents because yadda yadda." Yes, I know it would be something that could impact her in regards to losing her sons and husband, but if I try to go that route you would shoot me down because I'm a new player to this site.
And finally: Leadership. Again, I am getting shot down because I'm new to the site and so haven't proven myself. Well, I'm sorry, but it is kind of hard to do so when you don't get much chance of posting because this is set up so you don't have to post all day every day. I like that about the site. But let's face it. I've played many characters on many other sites and I am, in real life, a Leader. Not just at home, but also at work. I think I have earned the right to have at least ONE character start off as a Leader, so long as it is clear that she's not a Military one. I won't do that yet.
I'll take out the lines about communications that is redundant. As for the martial arts, well, it
was listed in the courses that a Plebian would take should they show progress. Maybe I did too much, but figured she'd have at least learned enough of the basics and nothing more to defend herself if needed.