Blizzard, dude, you gotta give people at least 3 days to reply to PMs before assuming they're not answering. I saw your PM, and just haven't had a chance to look the character over until now, and I really don't feel like you literally posting this up almost dead on 36 hours after sending me the first PM gives me a great impression. And whatever Wes says, the Elysian CCG specifically says that Elysian characters need to be discussed with me, not just the GM. What he does with his faction is up to him, but Elysia is run by me, and I'd like to remain a bit more involved while we're still on the small side.
Leaving that aside for the moment...
The Description section needs a lot more detail. Everything needs to be full sentences, and just generally come off as less of a bullet point list, and more of a description. We're wanting to hear him DESCRIBED, in detail, not just the bare details. Does he have the overly toned look that professional body builders pick up, or just the more solid build that people who lift for function gain? Is his skin chalk white, or more on the tanned, out in the sun regularly tint that many Caucasians pick up? Are his eyes baby blue, or are they a darker, grey blue? The smirk part, the height part, all of that doesn't really need to be included here (though the smirk could remain if that's just how his face looks, not that he's actually smirking all the time). I've said it before, I'll say it again, but the description should be good enough that we could hand it to an artist, and they could come remarkably close to what you're picturing when you think of the character.
This next part is just in general, because it covers a few different areas, but the entire concept of Plebian/Patrician seems to be a bit off of how things would be normally. Patricians don't so much look down on Plebians, as they do pity them. A core of the culture and faith is based around the idea that it is the duty of all Patricians to guide and nurture the lesser beings around them, to help them come closer to the level of existence Patricians come by naturally. They're less likely to mock, and more likely to guide, and though that guidance may come in a faintly condescending manner, it's only rarely malicious in the way that your profile seems to imply repeatedly. For lack of a better way to say it, they'd not likely behave maliciously if only because they feel you're such an object of pity that it would be unnecessarily cruel to do so. While there are the occasional exceptions to the general way of things as there are with anything, they would most definitely have been the exceptions, not the norm.
Now, how you want to extrapolate that to the character is up to you. Probably the simplest way to explain it would be that he was infuriated by the condescension and implication that he wasn't as good as Patricians just because of his birth. That would allow most of what you have to remain intact at the core, but be more accurate to what the normal state of things is. You other simplest option would be to make it all in his head. Make him the kind of person who would take offense at the smallest things, so that the normal way of handling things would still come off as offensive to him. That would change him a bit more as you go ahead with playing him, but again, allow you to stick pretty close to the core character history, at least.
Until that's addressed, I can't really give a good review of the personality or history on the whole.
Some of the skills need a bit of tweaking, mostly in terms of phrasing. Fighting, for example, "have given him a basic, but sufficient set of abilities". Sufficient for what? The skills that are sufficient for self-defense are nothing like the skills that would be sufficient to act as an assassin, just to use a rather extreme example. For the rest of them, they're... passable, but I'd still like to see a little more out of them. I really tend to favor a paragraph for each skill. It's just a matter of detail, really, because how well you write a skill has just as much impact, if not more, than having the skill in the first place, especially with skills like your Entertainment, Humanities, and Knowledge skills.
The inventory is broken at the moment. Probably the easiest way to fix it would just be to throw it all together with bullet points.
This character still needs work to be ready for approval.