Actually, the rule is that you have to hold the rights to the photo, period. So, unless you're
Arantza, or have written permission to be using the image, it needs to be removed. You can use the anon art if nothing else, or you can see if anyone is willing to do a quick sketch for you, even if you can't do a commission.
Now, in terms of actual review...
The first line in build needs to be removed. Her status as a slave has nothing to do with her build description. This is basically just a factual area where you write out the details of the character physically, the why and reasons stuff might not be noticeable would belong in the history, for the most part.
In eyes, just describe the shape. There are no Caucasians in the setting, so the current meaning doesn't apply. Also, it's called "heterochromia", not monochrome, when the eyes are different colors.
You can just scratch the ears spot if there's nothing of note. That's only included since some races can have alternate styled ears.
The big thing is that if you're going to keep hedging each description with "when it's clean", or something along those lines, then you should include a secondary description for what she looks like when she's not, if it's a common thing for her. Doing that makes it sound like she looks completely different when she's clean, so the description wouldn't fit her anymore.
Personality is okay, but keep in mind it'll make interacting with other players harder on you if you play it straight, and that can make plots a lot less fun.
Her dad needs to be listed here. Even if she doesn't know who it is, this is an OOC biography, not something that could be looked up IC. There are no "unknown"s on an OOC document.
I'll leave the history be for the most part, since there isn't really much to it. But the one thing that sticks out is how is she going to end up on the Wayward? Is she bought by someone on the crew? Or did she escape and run? I ask just because you don't mention anyone from the plot, or how she would arrive there in the history, and that's the point where the history should leave off, right before she steps into the plot.
On the inventory, a multitool might make more sense than most of the tools there. Keep in mind, this is high-sci-fi. We have tech centuries beyond modern tech, and a lot of it can't really be worked on with irl modern tools. Nep tech is a bit more traditional than most, but it's still going to need some higher level tools than that.
Last thing, though this is a little one, is that you should re-write the line in the finance section to clarify her position, and whether or not she makes any money from it. Nothing much, just "so-and-so is a ____ on the Wayward, and makes about ____ a month."
Overall, not bad.
Still needs some tweaking though.