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Approved Submission Thunderer Heavy Rifle

Commissar Farzi

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https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/iron-and-blood-reactivated.68731/
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=:corp:iron_company:weapon:thunderer_heavy_rifle
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Thunderer Ammo on Star Army Space Roleplay

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Submission Faction(s)
  1. Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
For those uncomfortable moments when you absolutely have to kill the uglies; accept no substitute.
 
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Possible Quality Problems Identified (Ammo page)​

After analyzing the page structure, a few possible problems about the readability and usability of the page were identified. Please have a look at the points below and see if you can correct them. Keep in mind that this was an automatic analysis - you need to judge yourself if it is correct.

Incorrectly Nested Sections​

The page contains sections that skip section levels. This hinders readability and structure. A section should only directly contain the next subsection levels. Consider adding missing sub section headlines or move up your existing sub sections to the correct level.

Two OOC Sections​

Please merge OOC sections into on.
 
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I approve the rifle but not the ammo, we need to figure out the DR situation with that first.
 
I guess the issue is the DRs should probably not include the "after effects" for the number, just the initial hit, if that makes sense.
 
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