The history looks fine to me, as the actions on all sides seem pretty justified in-character. The only thing I'm still wondering about is why the two creators chose a standard human genome as the basis, and not a Freespacer one; Freespacers grow faster and can be trained in VR. I guess if they were always planning on integrating them into human society and whatnot, it could be seen as a 'fresh start'. Spacers are almost always naturally sterile, and the radiation resistance wouldn't be needed as much, e.t.c...
It does raise the question, though, why not just build a robot/automata that does this? The only reasons I can think of for having them organic is maintenance costs, or perhaps the fact that the child is some kind of ongoing experiment that they still aren't sure is going to pay off completely... Like, this is something that half the setting is guilty of, to be honest, but it does bare thinking about for the sake of suspension of disbelief. The only reason why the Star Army of Yamatai doesn't use machine AIs as much is because they are still somewhat scared of them, and even then the Nekovalkyrja creation process is shrouded in mystery.
As for the custom giant robot, that's also something that you'd get away with entirely depending on the thread you are joining. As far as I know, the only mecha threads even running right now are in the 188604 plots, but independent plot GMs may also give you the thumbs up if the idea sounds like it is worth the hassle.
Having a power armour is definitely more workable than having a full on giant mecha, so yeah, it's probably worth going down that route.
As for the other stuff... Well, I wasn't trying to order you to make them a robot or anything. That's totally not my place to say.
It's also totally a meta thing that organic humanoid characters will always be the most physically powerful in almost any setting; But that's only because most people prefer to make/play organic characters that they can personally relate to... In fact, you are about the third or fourth person that's specifically done an "organic freespacer super soldier project" character.
As for the 'default star army character', it's kind of a running theme of introspection with Nekovalkyrja that they have no idea why they were even made humanoid, so... Yeah... Exploring it is one thing, saying it's just because of the meta is another.
Either way, you're asking for advice and input, I'm just trying to give you ideas. Trying to give people the kind of intrigue that will make them want to RP with you. SARP is all about collaboration at the end of the day.
If somebody wants to take you up on this for a plot and approve it, I won't block it. Just yeah.
Basically already said this, but just to set it in concrete; I have zero problem with this being approved from a Freespacer perspective.
Sorry if there was any kind of misunderstanding. I only meant to add depth, because this faction specifically gets used for this exact trope a whole lot. It's not any more out of place than other submissions I've approved in the past, though, so I'm not shooting it down.
Talking to a GM if they want to let you join their plot is obviously a thing that still needs to be done, but that's kinda what has made people overreact on this, to be honest. For better or for worse, people are bound to review it as if it is entering their plot personally.
It's up to your judgement, then, Ame.
Lijosu, right now I'm the person that is going to approve or reject the character. Only other people to do so are Wes or Nashoba. So, can you tell me what you don't want to change that people have told you to change?
Hey there. I am curious if the character still being in contact with the creators is a deal breaker. Are you firm that they are a package deal? Also, is it feasible that you would own all those weapons? I mean they are cool and everything but quite an advanced armory.
Stick to this for skills:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=guide:skills
You'll need to ask @Syaoran if you can have the skinsuit, service pistol, and blades:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...ar_empire:technology:equipment:skinsuit_mk_ii
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:abwehran_star_empire:technology:weapons:viblade
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...pire:technology:weapons:mdp-04_service_pistol
@Legix for the shotgun:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:weapons:cqbs-12
@FrostJaeger for the BA guns:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...ary:equipment:weaponsersonal:ranged:ingtris
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...ary:equipment:weaponsersonal:ranged:atromos
That’s going to be a no for the Phaelaes War Spear, the Atromos Particle Rifle, and the Ingtris Flamethrower, @Ametheliana and @Lijosu, as they were not and are not available for public sale.
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