Hi,
Okay, I fixed a few things for you, like the red links for rank, added a few other Wiki links and fixed the inventory.
I found a few things that need to be addressed though.
History:
Yamataian's like Nekovalkyjra regenerate so the paralysis would not be permanent, and if the body was so badly damaged, they would have just made another Yamataian body, the government wouldn't force a male to become a female.
Valkyrja do not have to sign a lifetime contract. A created Valkyrja only need serve for 8 years, and then will have completed their contract.
As for the memories being altered, you would need to add something in his/her history as to why someone would have tampered with the backup data since that's a major violation of the law.
Personality:
withdrawn when asked about her life as a yamataian.
If she has no memory of that life, why would she become withdrawn? And what about her family? What relationship do they have.
I do not object to this character, I'm just saying that the history needs to provide answers to the above questions. Perhaps he made an enemy and the 'accident' that landed him in the hospital was supposed to be fatal, and failing that the enemy decided to bribe someone to commit a 'death of personality'.
Since this one is headed towards my plot, I'm going to ask one of the other reviewers to handle it from here.