As far as speeds in atmosphere go, we should probably have a chat with the site as a whole as to how fast things in the atmosphere should be able to go.
That being said, I think the appearance also needs a stronger description. Can you describe it as if you were describing what it looks like to an artist? Not just what it looks like as a fighter, but how it looks when transformed and what 'transformed' parts go where?
After that, we should start detailing some of the interior equipment, and note how many weapon hard points there are, and where they are (both transformed and not)