Approved Submission Vapor Rounds (AKA Blanks)

[Arbitrated]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:equipment:vapor-rounds-blanks

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:equipment:vapor-rounds-blanks
Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:equipment:vapor-rounds-blanks

Faction:
FM Approved yet? No, @Wes
Faction needs art? I don't believe so.

For Reviewers:

Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Maybe I'm not looking hard enough, but I couldn't find this submission template o .o I had to copy it from another submission.
There's a small chance I messed the nomenclature up by the way, if someone could help me out with that it would be appreciated ^~^;

 

[Ethereal]

We get it you vape pap

I might take this one but am a little busy the next few days

I'm p sure the stats headers need a lil bit o' text under them before the bullet points tho ^^

 

[Wes]

I suggest calling them Type 40 instead of something on the standard product nomenclature system because they're not a part and the current nomenclature on the WIP is unsuitable because U is for hand tools, etc.

Please add a link to the damage rating system where it's mentioned for the first time.

FM approved for Yamatai

 

[Arbitrated]

Added in the link and changed it to "Type 40 Vapor Rounds".

I'm not sure what sorta text I'd put under the stats areas, did you have something in mind Eth? ^^;

 

[Ethereal]

I think I was just being overly cautious you prolly don't need anything under stats headers ^^

It actually looks good to me, I'm not the greatest at speeds and things so if another mod wants to jump in on the technical specs they can.

For now I'll give ya a provisional APPROVED since I can't see anything wrong myself

Be careful those hollow shells don't fragment or explode in firing under the forces normally given to real rounds tho~

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved