- Submission Faction(s)
- None (nebulas, etc.)
- Submission Terms
- I agree
Need to get some pricing numbers for a few of the calibers this is available in but other than that I feel this should be a pretty easy article to approve ^^ famous last words
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Approved Submission Wyatt's Custom Precision Pistols
- Thread starter SirSkully
- Start date
Oh right, I was meant to bully @Charmaylarg Dufrain and @Legix to see if they had some e̵l̵d̴r̸i̷t̵c̷h̷ ̴i̵n̶s̴i̴g̶h̸t̷ for what the pricing of the .357 Smg and .45 Nep should be, cheers~
Syaoran
Retired Staff
Okay looked it over right away since it wasn't too complicated. There is one big thing though.
The first section is more of a 'history' than what should be in the summary. Because of that someone reads all that and still isn't sure if this article is a product, a service or a company right form the start. So move that section to 'history' and then write up a summary/overview to tell us what this article is.
After that I'll do a proof reading of it all for grammar and spelling, but the first read it didn't seem that bad.
The first section is more of a 'history' than what should be in the summary. Because of that someone reads all that and still isn't sure if this article is a product, a service or a company right form the start. So move that section to 'history' and then write up a summary/overview to tell us what this article is.
After that I'll do a proof reading of it all for grammar and spelling, but the first read it didn't seem that bad.
Syaoran
Retired Staff
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Gonna go ahead and APPROVE this
] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Gonna go ahead and APPROVE this
