Soban
Convention Veteran
- Submission URL
- https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=martial_arts:hesskara
- Submission Faction(s)
- Yamatai (except Elysia)
- Submission Terms
- I agree
Developed a martial art for the Separa'Shan
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Approved Submission [Yamatai] Hesskara (Separa'Shan Martial Arts)
- Thread starter Soban
- Start date
I do not think this is filled out enough.
Here are examples of ways I have filled out martial arts pages:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kuvexia:martial_art:colluctance
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=martial_arts:neju_koyu
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:iromakuanhe:desert_wind
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:iromakuanhe:hundredfold_palm
Please let me know if you need any help.
Here are examples of ways I have filled out martial arts pages:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kuvexia:martial_art:colluctance
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=martial_arts:neju_koyu
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:iromakuanhe:desert_wind
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:iromakuanhe:hundredfold_palm
Please let me know if you need any help.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
I disagree, @Ametheliana, as the article is far more in-depth than the Sora-Mai section of the Martial Arts article - thus in my official opinion it is of sufficient length and detail.
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ N/A ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[ N/A ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- @Wes or @Nashoba, the Faction Managers of the Yamatai Star Empire, need to post their approval of the submission in this thread.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ N/A ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[ N/A ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[
] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread[
] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki[
] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to[
] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section[
] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
