I asked Immortal to take off pricing as it's for military use and not civilian.
This review is for: Aether Blade Series with URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:weapons:ke-m2-w3900_aether_blade_series
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] A very high level of overall quality
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] A general topic sentence under the title header
[N/A] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
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] Needed and/or useful to the setting
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] In the proper format/template
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] Proofread for spelling and grammar
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] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
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] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
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] No red and/or broken links
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] Reasonably scientifically plausible
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] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does notβ¦
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] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
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] Obtusely redundant
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] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
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] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
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] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
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] Use second-person language (βyouβ or βyourβ) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
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] Use bombastic language (βvirtually immune,β βnearly indestructible,β βinsanely powerful,β βhorrible effectsβ)
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] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
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] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
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] Lacking Detail
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] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article hasβ¦
[N/A] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
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] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
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] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
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] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Approved