Re: New Character and a New Player
Currently there is a betting pool, somewhere, for how soon the Euchie bites it, too~. Hee.
Banter aside, though, this hasn't been touched in a bit. And that's a damn shame.
Well, lets take a look at what you have, then.
Hm.
Well! Your card thingy is fine, quite fine in fact. Kudos. And you have a Japanese text bit of the name, too, which gets a extra kudos.
Moving on!
One would complain, for bra size, that there is a number after the cup, though thats in measurements. Kudos on doing that, though I can't say my mammary glands are huge enough to warrant a bra or anything so I dunno if it's right~.
Your description, however... Ah... Needs work. Hard work.
You need to describe your body overall, not just some small details or partial bits of the prompt. Right now it tells me nothing how the character looks.
Now, Imma be bad and use one of my charries as a example...
Kessie should do.
Now, look at
that description. Hardly one of my best, on the contrary rather poor for me, though still descriptive enough to get a picture, even if there
wasn't a image to use. And, lets face it, you probably won't get a image any time soon unless you strive for it yourself.
Personality, now. Well, obviously this isn't done in the least, ho hum. Get to it! As someone who loathes actually typing out a personality exert, I will say this; Unlike the description you can be...
Very basic. The personality is formed in roleplay, anyway.
History will probably be her being born on a ship from a Neko parent, or from a usual vat, and then a bit on her basic training. Simple.
Conviently Kessah is a techie, too, so you can just look at that for a base idea of skills. Simple stuff, really.
Oh, to answer your lil' question, it was retconned into being Nepleslian and Yamataian for English and Japanese, respectively, a bit ago. Lots was made before this, though, and remains unchanged. Thusly, both are accepted, though ICly it's the former.
Your inventory should really just be copy pasta from wherever that list of inventory is... You aren't going to have any real personal possessions, being only a year old neko on a warship. (Or, I assume on a warship.)
Finances aren't strictly necessary, either, by the way. Usually it isn't maintained by people, anyway.
All in all, you'll be fine.
