Hi! I'm just passing through, not related to the approval process, but ended up reading your submission. It's a good start! I had a few questions and comments:
- Tattoos should be fine, I've seen other nekos with them. I'm not sure the exact logic other than them having fine control over their bodies.
- Is her scar more of a birth mark? If it's a scar, would be interesting to hear how she got it, maybe a hospital technician was being sloppy. Does she try to hide this scar/mark, is she proud of it, does it motivate her in any way?
- Why does she know Abwheran and Seraphim? Maybe some details on if she's interested in talking to people with those languages or if she wants to participate in diplomacy?
Sorry this was quick on my phone, hopefully it made sense! > .<