DJ P4NTSL3SS
Inactive Member
1) "before its all over" should be "before it's all over"
2) Why wouldn't she have gotten M4 training as well as the Daisy M6 and M2 that you say she got?
There are a lot of things I really like about this character. Not just who she is, but how you put her together. Really well done! Wes may have things to add.