Might wanna toss it through word to clear up the grammar and rare typo, here and there. Overall, though, it looks good on my end of things.
However.
Ideally your species would link to either page, especially considering they are a bit more rare. Your physical descriptions are also a bit off - Your build and skin color, for instance... Doesn't say your skin color! Your ears don't say anything, though I am not entirely sure why that's there in the first place.
Distinguishing features in particular is
slightly kind of hard to make out. A few to many typos and such, there.
(Also that's not how measurements work but most people can't do it either so whatever.
Whatever, I say.)
Additionally, you have to take the
Mindy 3A because you're hella tall. This doesn't really change anything nor is it
too important, but it's a detail to keep in mind. You'll have to have your own, personalized armor and can't share with other people - And making a new one takes thirty hours. So you'd best keep yourself safe!
Past that, so long as Doc approves and my points are done, you seem to be fine.