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Approved Character YSS Sakishima, new character, Ise Momoka

Right, finally over here.

From the top;

You're after the NH-33m, not the old stuff. I would enjoy if you made links to everything, especially species and ranks. I don't care either way about any occupational codes, so that's fine.

Appearance is alright, personality probably could be improved in time, but it's fine now.

History is alright. There are a few minor issues with it, however; she has served for a whole five years, a year away from completing her second tour even. Is there a particular reason she would still be relatively low in rank and be assigned to a messy bit of space - On a tiny escort, no less?

Nothing that won't get you approved or anything, but so long as you realize there is something off with that picture.

While it seems we've gone away from the whole "only seven skills" thing, you only have six! Feel free to grab at things you might want. You don't need to have seven or more, of course.

And you can just link to the standard issue for gear.
 
Thanks for replying! :) , to respond to your concerns.

I chose the NH-29M since it fit with how long this character has been around. I kinda like the idea of her not being the top of the line model.

I will add in all the links once things are more finalized. Wiki code isn't my strong point, so have to go back through and figure it out :p

Personality will develop once I get to play the character for a while and will most likely change a bit.

As for her rank. She has been demoted and spend a bit of time on leave after the Battle of Yamatai. She has served aboard larger ships, cruisers and a battleship, but the assignment to the Sakishima was what was available at the time. Also, figuring if she started as a Santô Hei and worked her way up to Santô Juni thats a pretty decent climb for 5 years.

As for the additional skill, I really don't know what to slap in there yet. *shruggs* I'll look it over and add something, just donno what to yet
 
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